I'll just start with telling you that I like this picture! ^^
It's skillfully drawn and has catched Asuma's personallity really well.
But I still think that it lacks originallity.
This pic may not have been seen before since you obiously created it, but it isn't something entirely new; Asuma standing looking relaxed with a cigaret, clouds drifting by is becomming a cliché, and that's too sad, because I really really love pictures like this, especiallt when it's so well drawn!!

You have a real neat style. and actually it looks really easy, but I know it isn't. I really reapect those who can get this close to a so original style as Masaishi Kishimoto's is. I admire those who can do that.
But stull do I appresiate whose who have their own style more. because it's original.

This picture sadly don't do much impact on me, now is the vision of it totally clear to me, I admire your skills, but I know this lacks origimallity: that's why I have rated this deviation as I have.

A well drawn fanart, just a bit too cliché.
originality is what I miss.

Bueno, es la primera vez que hago una crítica y no sé cómo va bien esto, pero aquí voy...
Teniendo en cuenta que sigues sin tableta, te felicito por la limpieza que tienen las líneas, por la nitidez y por el trazo seguro.
Me gusta cómo sombreaste, así tan rayadito da esa sensación de sombreo sin que se pierdan las formas del cuerpo.
Lo único que veo algo extraño es la mano del cigarro, que tiene algún dedo un poco tieso (en concreto el índice), pero nada grave.
Como siempre, dejaste clavadito el personaje... Kishimoto debería de tenerte miedo... Tu técnica de ninja copia es perfecta